I really loved how you handled the whole first part. This was the only part that made me cringe, just a smidge:
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I said "I know, that was a tough conversation. We have a lot to sit on for a while." She said "Yeah." I hesitated, then said "W, I'm not sure what I need." She said "I know, you will though. You'll figure it out."
I would have preferred that you not INITIATE that. Let HER come back to YOU again, at which point you can take the first-person-plural out of it, and say something like "I'm not sure how I feel about things right now."
But overall, not bad at all, and I really liked how you drew a mini-boundary about the kiss on the cheek, and yet didn't go all pouty on her when she opted for "nothing." LOL
Yeah, I realized after the fact that was a mistake. She was hesitating and lingering on the phone, so I felt like I should acknowledge our previous conversation.
