3. I’m here to say he’s done it before and this time is no different other than him involving his friends at her insistence. Every time (with me and last OW) he CLAIMED he was totally in love, he CLAIMED it was his soul mate, he he CLAIMED to pursue marriage right away.
Just from a curosry glance you might want to sneak the stuff i put in italics into it... if you put it the original way it sounds validating
YOu want to make it sound like he's lying/confused/deluded so insert the word claimed in there...
Just like a criminal trial, the defendant is always called "the ALLEGED murderer" not "the murderer"
I will read a second time later tonight, but I saw that one and i wanted to say something right away
