I don't see anything wrong with it. You were just getting stuff off your chest. Trust me, it's not going to be your first. What did she say?

M-43 W-40
2D - 9 and 5

Emotion, yet peace.
Ignorance, yet knowledge.
Passion, yet serenity.
Chaos, yet harmony.
Death, yet a new life.

RECONCILED AND WISER