Going straight forward...antlers 6th thread.

[Bridgestone]

I like the 2nd version with IWITW's pieces. I think the "the you are everythin to me" .. is too over the top for her to hear now.

I think the niece & the 'love me???" texts need to be 2 different ones.. with the initial text telling her that.

EX: "I will be sending 2 more texts to address the two issues I hear you having concerns about."

Keep them separate.. accept responsibility.. show her the difference you have made.

I like how you did most of the writing yourself.. it sounds like "you"