Don't mention other friends-who-are-girls going through your closet. You probably don't need all those pics - one with D is great, the rest should be you doing things you love. I like the first pic a lot. Trim some of the points about how you are still learning - once is better.
It looks good! Good luck with it...I'm on, too. I think eHarmony might be better in the end, though - time will tell.
