Overall it's good, Dia. Perhaps my comments are just stylistic, and immaterial. But I would put the conclusions first, and then the list. As I read down the list, I started ticking off the requirements, and thinking, .....there's more? Perhaps if you start with how important time together is, and then list the kinds of time together, maybe not being so fixed on the quantity (2x per week; 1 week/year, etc.), it wouldn't sound so demanding. After all, things come up and life gets hectic, if you are getting the love tank filled regularly, do you really have to stop at every gas station?
