I haven't added to this thread yet, but I agree with Karen. Take the bit out about the OW. It looks a little like bitterness. You want them to know you are strong and determined.

Me 36, W 34 | D 8 | M 3.5y
Sep 2Aug09 | Left 6Sep09 | OM in 10Oct09 | NC 17Nov09 | Gave up caring - Jan 2010

"Have integrity. Do what is right, not what is expedient."
"Delay is the antidote for anger"