Too formal, stilted. See my suggested changes, below.
Originally Posted By: CountingCrows
Here's my first draft of the letter I'd like to give to W tomorrow. Please advise if I'm missing something or anything could be worded better:
"As we talked about this morning (12/2/09), I will no longer be paying the temporary weekly financial support that I've been providing you. I can give you the last check for $XXX will be given to you on January 1, 2010.
I will pay your December truck payment and insurance. Beginning January, you will need to take over the truck payments of $XXX a month, payable to me by the 26th of each month. We will arrange for a separate insurance policy for the truck only, which you will be responsible for paying, starting in January.
I will pay your cell phone bill for your cancelled account in the amount of $XXX will be paid by me.
Next week, I will request a Stop Payment on the monthly direct-draft charges for your XXXX credit card. You may wish to contact them to arrange to continue payment, or wait until we meet with a bankruptcy lawyer to advise the best action.
I will continue to meet the family's needs and obligations in regards to health/dental insurance, your counselor's visits, outstanding loans and utilities, as I've been doing. I will also of course continue to provide food, shelter, clothing and other expenses for S7. However, I will not continue to finance a 2nd residence and expenses, since it is your decision for you to live apart from our family."
