Short and simple....You are learning grasshopper. I might have gotten a little bit shorter...but that is nitpicking.
ADD note-Is that actually what you sent her? Or is it a shortened version? I have a problem in text or conversation where I shorten up what I am saying. In doing that I usually drop key words that take smooth sentences and turn them all choppy.
I would work on it with proactive communication. After I gave an employee direction I would ask them to repeat it back to me. It helped me see where I was coming up short communicating.
Add cnslr and i are working on that,i use to many pronouns and expect someone to know where my train of thougth is.
