Here you go how about this, just a bit softer and inviting whilst still business like!
"Hi H
I havent had any feedback from the car insurance company, did you manage to upgrade my policy? I am a bit tight on money this month after putting the additional money in the joint account, which if Im still in my temporary job next month I will take some time to sort out!
You know you mentioned helping with some of the household jobs, it would be useful if you could mow the lawns as my hands and fingers are troublesome at the moment. Perhaps you would let me know what day would be amenable"
Remember "softly softly catchy monkey"
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W 47 H 47 M 24 T 30
Once lost but now found and happily married again!
