I know this is about HIW and what she is going through, but the script analogy couldn't be more fitting. (Amazing how all of our situations are SO similar)

Hope - I hope you are able to do some revisions and write a great second act!

Me: 35
W: 31
S:9
M: 10 years
Together 13
MySitch - Ups & Downs
She moved out the day before Thanksgiving 2009, over 13 months post-bomb.