Mac, just my outsider (bystander?) perspective, which sometimes is all we here can offer each other, right?
Originally Posted By: mac-ct
Pursuing (little bit with the text)
I would add the calling after her at the mall.
Originally Posted By: Mac-ct
Not sure what the last two lines mean...
Wife tomorrow? Wife next couple of weeks?
I was referencing the calling her tomorrow re: maintenance court, meeting to sort out finances, what she's facing/will be thinking the next four weeks.
Just pointing some things out to look at. Certainly not saying I'm right, since I'm not in your head (and have all I can do to tame my head sometimes)
Gardener
"My soul, be satisfied with flowers, With fruit, with weeds even; but gather them In the one garden you may call your own." Cyrano deBergerac
