"In the car on the way home, I just looked at him, I mean really looked at him and he glanced over and smiled. First real connection and it was because I wasn't judging, I was consciously just taking him in..."
I halfway expected the next line was going to say "then I stopped the car, opened the door and left him by the side of the road." LOL!
You're doing great.
That would have been something! Ya, isn't that line great? You can fill in the rest with whatever you think works best.
Hey, this could be fun- anyone else have an ending for my run on sentence?
Ya, isn't that line great? You can fill in the rest with whatever you think works best. 
