First tip: In internet-land, posting with all your text in upper case is considered shouting and renders it largely unreadable to many, myself included. Please switch off your caps lock in future. You will get more readers and feedback that way.
Gotta go sleep, but I'll have a better read tomorrow and get back to you.
SF
Spellfire aka Mike
"Women do not like controlling men. They respect and are attracted to men who control themselves. They ultimately are repelled by men who allow themselves to be controlled." -S&A