Hi Momma, I would take out the word "Unfortunately". Also I would not let H know that you are fearful for him to leave. That is giving him too much control. I think the letter is good.
Let us know..good luck


Me 53
H 50
D16, D29
M 22 years
bomb 7/08 INH - alien pod replaces H
8/08 - OW (direct report), I work there also
bomb II - H moves 10/1
expose ow 10/22
D to be final 9-09