Personally, I think the newest rewrite couldn't be any better . You've done an awesome job taking all the ladies' suggestions into consideration, and at the same time, have kept it true to who you are and what you are feeling. The main goal of rewriting your letter was to still say everything you feel but tone it WAY down( ) from the original. I believe you've accomplished that.
I agree with what the others have said though about not giving W the letter while she is sick. It really wouldn't be received well!
You've done great work, Jeff, and you should be very proud of yourself!!!
(((((((Jeff)))))))
Getting over a painful experience is much like crossing monkey bars. You have to let go at some point in order to move forward. ~ Joseph Campbell
. You've done an awesome job taking all the ladies' suggestions into consideration, and at the same time, have kept it true to who you are and what you are feeling. The main goal of rewriting your letter was to still say everything you feel but tone it WAY down( 
) from the original. I believe you've accomplished that.
