I like the revised version much better. Tried to reply last night but the thread had locked already.
The original was too much 'woman' It is probably how I would have worded it too, but I think the new version is 'male'. Short, to the point, no real inflammatory triggers... I think your H will get the info he needs, hopefully without having reason to get upset.
I hope this two week trial ends up being a positive. It is too bad that he has put a time limit in his head. But at least you have something to work with.
Me-36 H-30 T-7yr, M-3yr DivorceBusting Saved my marriage! sep 6-08 to 12-08. Together again, things are good!