Reverse Divorce busting?

[Cinco]

Lost - 1st paragraph is good maybe drop the opening "As you may recall".

I've grown tired of trying to 'right' things by myself with little to no effort from you. Am I willing to continue to put forth 100% effort on our marriage? That depends, are you?

You might be able to make this sound a little more encouraging to her. Like the studious Bagheera suggests, if you show a solid 3 months or so of work on yourself you can skip the "tired of trying" and say "I am trying my best and hope that you will join me in making this marriage the best it can be. We need to both put 100% into this."

I WILL continue to seek the emotional intimacy and connection that the physical act of sex provides to me and I hope that it will be with you.?

See Bagheera's list item (2), this could be worded so that you and she are both seeking connection, it's sounds one sided the way you present it.

I hope I didn't shred too harshly. Read your letter again to yourself in a couple of days. If you do as Baggy suggests and work hard on yourself for a while and then write another letter after putting in that work, it will be totally different from this 1st one you wrote. I know my letters evolved from anger to loving as I worked on myself.

I know I had some pretty dark days a few months ago myself and now, with work, have seen the light of day once more.

Cinco