Hope4us struggle, part 6

[Hope4us]

Then I say, "It's obvious working on our marriage your way isn't helping. I've read a lot of books and talked to a counselor that specializes in recovering a marriage after an affair and I know what needs to be done to give our marriage the best chance at making it. If you're not willing to even listen/read what needs to be done, then it's best if you stayed here until you can make the commitment necessary for us to have a chance".

How's that sound?