Karen,

Don't give me that "It's early!" stuff, here's a bottle!

I'll be working on colorful, in particular, because that has seemed like a weak spot in my writing to me, not enough good evocative descriptions.

I'll show you what I'm writing when I get something. One of my comments to a woman tonight was that her husband's reviews of her work would be at least as valuable as whatever she gets from other writers, since he's a "reader," not another writer.

Thanks,

Joe


My sitch
More importantly, Light A Million Candles