Recently Married into a sexless marriage

[Dom R]

I would like you to stop drinking until we get our relationship back on track.

Err.. if it's a problem now, why would it not be a problem later? it makes no sense to me, to say that she needs to stop drinking merely until things are "back on track".
If her drinking is truely a problem, then it's important that she stop. period.

Same goes for your drinking, eh?

[..] I will GLADLY do those things when WE get back on track.

I think this is backwards.
Doing those things NOW, is what will help you GET things back on track.
That is what DB/DR says, among other things. It's not about giving her a list of things to do. It's more about what YOU can do. those are things that You Can Do, Now. So, you should start doing them!

Other than that, my comments are that there are certain lines in there that are very nebulous, and vague. I think if you cant sum up something in a single, clear sentance.. you should delete the multi-line explaination and rethink it.