I think its great. Very sweet but to the point. I like the part where you tell him you love him and want your M, but if that is not going to happen you will be ok as well.
Me: 46 FWS: 36 Married and Divorced 4/07, Pregnant 7/07,False R 7/07 Baby Girl born 3/08 Kicked him out because OW: 7/08 5/10 He realized what he had and lost. Moved home! REMARRIED 3/14/11!!