I think it sounds good.

Maybe add at the beginning that you hear what she is saying and that you are really trying to understand how she feels.

Quote:
We both have a long road to travel.


Just a thought...but if you said, "We both have long roads to travel". It doesn't put the expectation of it being one journey...but that you each have your own.

Also...do you think that the comments about love might be scary for her? She is probably still contemplating that part and so perhaps to her she doesn't see it is there to help overcome things. (does that even make sense?!?)

I am no expert B, I hope I am offering sound advice...but I'm a little nervous about leading you down the wrong path. Please take what I say with a grain of salt.
J~


M 35
H 29
M 4 yrs T 9 yrs
D 3
S born 10/19/07
Bomb 09/10/07 Separated next day
OW - broke up and H moved out 09/07/08
Status - still figuring this out