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No need to be sorry, I don't know alott of Greek Myth.

Hey Kali, Are ya still looking out at us..??


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It surely means that I don't know
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Sara, you are very creative and expressive. I hope you still write when you want to.

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I like the tortured souls part---because you get the image of fireflies and darkness.

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Thank you, Yoyo. I feel like the little girl in the smocked dress with the pink bow in her hair.

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The story is that Orpheus descends into Hades (Hell) to retrieve his lost love, so I wanted to get all those dark twisted images.

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Sara, I shall give you an A+ for your wonderful poem.




Life's challenges are not supposed to paralyze you, they're supposed to help you discover who you are.
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Originally Posted By: Yoyowife
Sara that was beautiful.

Manuel,
Would you like to recite one of your poems (I'm scared )


Maybe on Friday I'll give ya afew lines. I am staying home but will see my friend Jack D.

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Sometimes I feel like my life resembles a Shakespeare play.




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Your Eurydice seems very helpless and ultra-feminine, gazing at clouds. I think Saffie would give her a royal smack.

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Thanks teach. I wrote those one summer when I taught creative writing at an arts camp.

Here's one the kids wrote. Just for H.

Little Miss Lola lost her boa
in the middle of the town,
She found a clown in her bed
standing on his head,
So she pulled his pants down!

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